In this text response blog, I chose do it on the comic about
the jovial principal or teacher figure and the disappointed parents. This comic
is about how many schools spend much of their money on new equipment or
stadiums while their students slack on school work and are not taught well and
end up receiving bad grades. I believe that this happens in many schools. Some
schools have the money to build all of these new stadiums and purchase the
expensive exercise equipment. I think just this drawing alone makes a great
argument. The teacher is happily telling the parents that the school has so
many great features such as an Olympic size swimming pool, new stadiums for
sports, and new work out equipment. The parents then proceed to as the teacher
why their child is failing in school. The teacher cannot respond and has a
puzzled look on his face and. I find this funny and true. Many schools spend
their money on only somewhat important things that do not have anything to do
with the academic part of the schooling. I like this comic because it explains
how some schools do not focus enough on academic scores. I believe that this
comic strip makes a very valid point in that many schools focus too much on
sports and do not help some students that really need the help. From my
experience, I remember how some teachers and classes helped the students that
were in sports to keep their good grades so they could stay in sports, but did
not offer the same incentives to other average students.
Dylan, Great choice for your analysis. Still, it's hard to see your overall thesis and main points in this post because they are getting confused with your thoughts about the topic. Please separate them out into paragraphs. Remember, in this TR post, your thoughts about the topic aren't the focus...instead it is your opinion of the rhetorical effectiveness of the image.
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